wow good battle

flow-deadly
structure-enyg
opener-Tie
closer-Deadly
punches-deadly
personals-deadly
creativity-enyg
enjoyment-both

enygma's best lines

You have no leverage in this battle...can't even crank the fulcrum
One look at his avi and you can tell that he ain't spanking no one
Deadly Vision is blind to the fact that I made his eye big
Only reason he's heard of....is cause his name's in my sig


not a bad verse but you still could elevate.....
developing and Penelope dont rhyme man......you need to work on that shit......your punches could hit harder and you could reword them alot more so that they stick better......your personals lacked and i didnt really like your flow......keep elevating man


deadlyvision's best lines

Cookin up some Hot Shit?Goin NoWhere Wit Ur Shit Betta Bite-Pac's-Battle...
Deleted his Pic Faggot!! A White kid tryin to Rap In Black-Legend's-Shadow..
Crhyme Sin?Ya'll Style's Like "Albino's In Tha Dark" Ya Shits "Plain-Ta-See"...
Im Like A Person,Already Commited Suicide None ya''ll Cant Hang-With-Me..

good verse but not your best.....
I liked your personals they was simple but complex at the same time......they hit hard and they stuck......could use a lil bit of rewording but sall good.......your flow was good but i didnt really like your structure....but its different for this site so not many people will probably like it.....keep it up man good verse

v/deadlyvision

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