i t was not that bad of a poem, if they have nothing good to say dun fuckin listen to em. ne way, u could of made it longer though. I thought it was a good topic to write about. I never really saw a relation of the title to the words of the poem. What i seen was your emtions mixed with clouds, an i don't think thats the point you were trying to get across. Other than that this was good, stayy thaa fuckk upp...

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