i really did not like how you ended this. i think i know what kind of message you were trying to get across, not too sure tho. The last 3 lines of your poem were really good!!

But as I sit and watch as still in some areas where we live where their are black and whites,
I denie that and say I lived in a colorblind soceity where color does not matter to me.
so before I stare back at you and u tell me what to say all I got to respond to society today,

I was really liking that, then all of the sudden it says...fuck you.. lol... I'm pretty sure you can find something different to use for the next time. stayy thaa fuckk upp

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