ite nice freestyle, got some stuff there u can apply to a battle, wit that got u shook like u got arthritis, good metaphor thats what u do ta put punches on cats here. u do that then u say sumin like U COULDN'T spit crack IF U was feedin from feens, u know say some shit like that, your lines COULDN"T kick shit IF U was writin in a pile of manuore, shit like that with the "U COULDN'T""IF" pretty simple way to have a punch on someone. then personals u take from there name or sig, like for example with your name, u suck on the stage cant move crowds jus better "FYI" it
....... only when u suck so much they rush the stage and kill MC RIOT
i think theres some wordplay in there too
wordplay is kinda like personification, or give a name for somin that aint really what it is, like when people say u spit, when u rap your verse.
or like "imma put this bitch in a "vice" there'll be lots of "gore""
i woudn't give your rhymes 3 dollars if they was a 5 dollar whore

shit like that, and if my shit didn't make sence theres that tutorials somewhere on the home page that tells ya the shit i jus siad.

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