both of you got down. good job.

its clear that you need to elevate ravage.........but your a newb, so thats expected. dont trip off of criticism, you'll get used to it. work on your lines. you came hard, but basic as fuck, feel me? when you battle, dont direct your verse at his mom the whole time.....aim at him. a good battle consists of.....punchlines, personals, metaphors and vocabulary. when you hit, you gotta hit hard bruh. this is a learning experience you. use it to your advantage. ravage, (or anyone forthat matter) do me a favor and drop an honest response for my open mic called......."ELITE LEAGUE (MY CRHYMIES)". thanks.

polifick, nice work. i expected you to come harder, but you did enough to win this. congrats.

vote........polifick

s.v........................c.s.

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QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection???
ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE



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