ok for ure first topical that was sum gud shit

u had gud flow and structure and ure first part was tight shit
u had gud wordplay and u stayed on topic all the way
the second part u began to fall off topic slightly, not completely but u still kept up ure wordplay and shit
Overall i'd give that spit 7/10
u got a lot of potential to be a gud topical and no one is perfect their first time aight

My opinion u in this shit cuz the crew is especially for playaz who are tryin to elevate their skillz and broaden their range instead of just stickin to simple battles!!

I'll tlk to UnHoly bout u and let u know playa

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