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Old 05-28-04, 07:53 AM   #18
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ok here it goes..................................

N-SIGHT
i liked ure verse, u shit flowed well from start to finish although ure structure was a little off in places with some bars stretched. u had gud wordplay in ure spit and u told the story well. u didn't fall off topic which is always gud...obviously and basically u painted a gud picture, i cud picture that shit happenin which is a sign of a gud topical verse. the only thing, when these topics come up, like getting away from the police, and escapin from prison and shit, why does everyone always fuckin die at the end, i'd like to see sumone live for once...DAMN!!! LMFAO!!!
Overall - 8/10

KILLAH BWOY
playa u came gud in ure verse, i liked it. structure was on which was gud, no stretched bars and it all flowed well. u to told a gud story nad i cud get the image of it all happenin. u didn't fall off topic, although i didnt quite get why u put that gettin drugged in the neck line tho. u to went with killing the playa at the end...lmao!! the only thing i felt with ures was that ure person doing the getaway sounded like he had been poppin steroid pills or sumthin. i mean he gets drugged and is feelin woozy and weak but still manages to jump up and pull himself up into the ventilation system, and then he falls two fuckin storeys which aint no small drop and just gets up and brushes himself off, other than that tho u had a tight spit, but i think them parts were what let u down!!
Overall - 6.5/10

V/ - N-Sight
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