3rd battle 2day so i'mma challenge a vet//
rip 2 shreds n then i'll seperate em like a marriage that's stressed//

^^ that's weak

u heard I wanted 2 battle n u got quite frightened//
cause I'll expose u as a fag who hit more men than Mike Tyson//(hit-slept with)

^^ lol...if u really have to explained your punch in this line, it's a weak punch to begin with...hit? are u serious


I have 2 2 show emcees that I master flows with ease//
plus I'm the sickest, U just a pussy with a vaginal disease//

^^ ur talking about urself more than dissing your opponent


why the fuck you boastin, cuz i can serve your ass without even postin/1 with my verses, i make the most kid, cuz i know niggas get burned like counrty roast man/2

^^ longish lines...but works because of ur rhyming..punch was only eh


and you sayin i suck you couldn't get bouty even if you & prince ass fucked/9
and that verse was luck my fame goin up like white bitches with butt/10

^^ uh..name one

imma leave yo ass lost like i left my date, its a verbal caution when i spit- put up yellow tape, cuz this kid is gettin fucked up like i slipped him date rape/16

^^ not so sure i like the set up here...

LM, ur punches needed to be stronger, with better metas and wordplay. But, this was enough to be aiight.


Vote: LM