Size up this chump,cock back tha pump,he paraplegic,he can's stand this
Still lickin his wounds from last time I had him layin on tha canvas
still aint elevated yet....this cats needs major construction
Thought he had a hot crew...ended up wit self destruction!

^^ flow is pretty good as well as the rhyming...but, this is too simplistic in my opinion...your punches were not landing hard on Killa...it seems like you were just talking to him than battling him

son scared to post against me cause win plus I add a lesson
Killah Boi scared to grow...his punchlines fear adolescence
^^ not bad...but could be more complex in set-up with metas/wordplay

Only Reason U Won Last Time Was Cause Nas GhostWrote Your Shit-
Even If You Threw Ur Cd At Jay-Z Ur Record Still Couldn't Be A Hit-
Actin' Like You Big..You Know Chryme Sindicate Didn't Want You-
Held Enygma's Fam For Randsom..he had to let him in the crew-

^^ pretty hard here...but personals shoud be explained if voters wont' know what they mean


Vote: Killa...more complex/harder hitting verse


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