aiyo, u gon diss me, don't even try dat
i walk into a store, see some bling, i aint even gotta buy that
2...wtf!!! that aint even a punch!!
u gonna rhyme tough, talkin how u be so buff
when really all u are is a chump, watchin niggaz on BET with handcuffs
3...weak as fuck!!
I grab your bitches legz and begin to fuck her
its da biggest dick she ever had, well...besides last summer
3...wtf is this, another shit line!!
datz when she fucked me for da very first time
she walked up to me and started flirtin, witout me even spittin a line
4...probly ure best line and still so wack!!
I'm enterin rap battles, its hot in herre, like nelly
When I walk by ya, I'll smack u like a pregnant bitch, and kick ya in da tummy
3...fuckin weak closer!!!


kid im not goin to lie you killed me...i died from laughter//
see i got these sick verses...call me the ill bar crafter//
7...gud opener, liked the 1st line best!!
im going to help u out and say nelly dont rhyme with tummy//
fake ass mc, check your title your new to rb you fuckin dummy//
6...gud line i guess, pretty basic vocabs!!
kid b4 u stepped up u should have took time 2 prewrite//
kid its either you cant freestyle or you jus learned to type//
8...funny ass line, gud closer!!

POINTS TOTALS

newbie herb - 15/50
creaTivitie - 21/30

V/ - the herb!! yea rite...lmfao!! real vote is creaTivitie

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