Thanx Misfound...

@Insane, I don't mind criticism but you said I need better flow and better rhymes?? Maybe it's you.. Cause when I spit it the flow is crazy. Better rhymes:

I'm Dyin Inside, Who The Fuck Cares I Feel Like I Been Beaten And Robbed..
But I Still Smile Sometimes Cuz I know You Upstairs Now Eatin Wit God..

Moms Tellin Me Have Faith, Grow And Believe, I Just Pray You Doin Good Homie..
Go Cuz You Freed But We Gon Keep Smokin This Weed Cuz The Hood Lonely..

^^Maybe now that you see the rhyme scheme, it'll flow better for ya. Anyway, thanx for the feedback and takin the time to read my shit. One.

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