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Old 05-28-04, 01:00 PM   #9
*Tay.G*SinCity*
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Originally Posted by .::N-Sight::.
^^ simple...ur structure is boo boo

and it affects the flow and how you read it...for example...try reading this sentence


THis .............is
a
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,example
of..........how

.
.
.
not.............to................write



Difficult to read it clearly and smoothly...that's how it is reading your lines


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Stay off my threads, I don't give a fuckk about your opinions. You can suckk my blackk cockk... BTW I posted our battle on 2 other sites, and you got KOd on both... bitch...
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