*Da FeMaLe BaNdIT*
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well u started off fine but ur rhymes fell off half way through..u should leran how to construct lines and bars...ur structure was horrible...try to throw in some multies..some better punches..u had some good direction no doubt..but work on ur complexity..*ONE*
SB
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