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Old 05-28-04, 10:27 PM   #6
DeaDly RhymeZ 01
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WHITE POWDER--- Yo u Came Way HARDER with Personls nice shit out there Nice Wordplay Good Line's Favorite 1::
You’re a noob to this site, this kid wouldn’t be accepted as a dark knight //
Imma murder this kid outright, but fuck it this time I ain’t gonna be polite //

Follow-Up--- yo i Seen ur BATTLE'S u a good n00b u came whack this time u had no hard hitting Punches at ALL or PUNCHES this was BADD for Follow-Up FAv Line from u

my stacks up and im scarin this gentlemen
White powder i have u goin through more shells than aquarium centers

^^ First line 2 short on that Bars


Break Down

White Powder

Flow 8/10 ( GOOD )
Rhymes 8/10 ( GOOD )
Structure 7/10 (Good / Decent )
Punches 8/10 ( GOOD )

Follow-Up

Flow 6/10 ( OK )
Rhymes 7/10 ( Good / Decent )
Structure 5/10 ( Bad / Allmost Decent not even )
Punches 4/10 ( WEAK! WEAK WEAK!!!! )


V/WHite POWDER

NoT JUSS OVER ALL BETTER VERSE

OVER ALL BETTER I CANT EVEN SAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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