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Old 05-28-04, 11:06 PM   #14
lyricallyabbusiv
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Posts: 25
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Metaphorically im twistin yo knees and got you crawlin on glass.
Because I shattered yo jaw and threw yo face in the grass.
weak opener...
You can throw up punches, but im like Kevin Garnett.
cuz when you shoot ya rhymes, there gonna hit the deck.
wtf?...weak...try peronsals..
You prolly think yo hard, cuz you must commit a lot of Siinz.
But dawg it don’t count, jerken off to the Olson Twins.
lol...datz iight...they hot tho
This shit aint even a fuckin battle, you’re the whole laughin stock.
Your in yo room pullin cocks out yo mouth when you hear yo mom knock.
sex jokes= played
And Yo ass is to lame dawg you should of never even started.
And yo mom never gave birth to you bitch, she pussy farted
wtf was that? worst bar
total-4/10



You've had four battles and each one you need a brain fix...
But instead you got your shit stird and then got it Mixx ...
lmfao...nice opener
All your battles get slept on and you are still wondering why...
After this battle you wont have to wonder anymore you gunna die...
eh..okay..
Watch me make this dude going insane and put him in a straight "jacket"...
Cause in this rap game you are never going to be able to hacket-it...
nice personal..
Take this dude make him go blue in the face, like trying to run in space...
This dude thinks he is back in his bedroom slapping his dick off of his face...
eh...weak..
All these newbs be thinking that the compare to all of us vets...
But all of your verse look like you just be spazzing out with tourettes...
lmfao..nice closer....structure was nice
total-8/10

vote- sinzz

hit up mah battles in fl