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Old 05-28-04, 11:25 PM   #11
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Trigga's Verse:

Ya first mistake was the fact that you quoted Em's lines//
But I dont blame you....I can see your raps are so shitty you gotta focus to bite rhymes//
stretched..pretty good personal

"But Slim what if you win wouldnt that be weird"//
Fuck yeah it would, cause shady ya d/r's dont live here!//
haha not bad

Didn't bite kid prove it! rename em to lyricallyabbusiv cas like it he plays other peoples music//
umm wheres the follow up?

Deal in 'Small Quantities', so they?re familiar with 'Your Chances//
They know you winnin is like Wheelchair-Bound white kids dancing//
played out

Ima strangle lyricallyabbusiv with USB cables to stop from 'stealing music//
Uh Oh lyrically, Eminem hasnt came with anything new so I have a feeling you'll loose it//
not a bad set up but didnt deliver as hard as it could

TRIGGA first to be like Waren-G and regulate Smiles//
If you forgot what i think of you man head over to 8 Mile//
nope...

i'llLeave his verse dispersed like the Band of Brothers in cremated sand//
This kid couldn?t ?connect a punch? if my ?face was glued to his hand//
played concept

I?ll have 'Ya Missin' like seniors who 'Lost-their-Teeth//
Try AUDIO cause you ain?t no way ?Safe-wit-Keys//
Like 'Musical Chairs' I?ll make ya ass 'Take-a-Seat//'
u broke it down like it was a mutli but it didnt even rhyme..newbish

Go 'head, step in this thread and come-get-smacked//.
You lookin' at 'submit reply' after your verse? A Bit of advice.....dont click that//
didnt rhyme.......

umm punches were decent but your structure was fucked....sometimes u have 2 lines a bar,sometimes 1 or 3....there were lines that didnt rhyme...punches were your strong point but most still had played concepts

Lyrically's Verse:

I told this kid that I was new, and the kid took the bait...
wanna b like pac?well guess watz in his death bed? ya fate*
nice personal/punch setup

His health is already at 0...culdnt kill this bitch anymore..
shit, i'd be dead too...if my rhymes were such a bore!
nice personal,could have delivered harder

Breaken em in half...making the mods pick up the debris..
leave this bitch more confused...dan da letters in his avy!
haha,nice

Has $250, well now u can go n buy a ghost writer...
burn this kids face...just to make your head 'lighter'...
first line was sick,could have followed a lil harder

Matrix huh?!..den try n dodge da punches im throwing...
now take a 'shot' at me...no wait..ur 14...ur still growing..*
pretty good closer

Your punches were about the same as his but werent so played......structure and flow won this battle for you,cuz his was just fucked

v/ Lyrically