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Old 05-29-04, 01:23 AM   #13
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hott battle for some rook's...aiight i think you lost this battle cuz of your structure it was all over the place...your punches werent that hard it flowed well but it wasnt consistent..you threw no personals and your verse lacked of strong multies and bad wordplay no extensive vocab either

killacamflow for once u used everyones advice and fixed your structure and your opener was one of the best if not the best punch i have seen you use good shyt yours flowed and was pretty consistent...structure was good...no personals need to start using them...wordplay was decent...no multies but punches made up for it..and your vocab was decent also

vote: killacamflow

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