$ik you had a decent verse good punches but your verse lacked off strong hitting punches and personals...u flipped on his name but thats it you didnt say anything directed at him...structure was decent but i dont like the way you space your bars apart...flow was good kinda consistent...

overall:5/10

publicity:you had a good verse and i think this is your first battle so for your first one you used strong punches first time i have seen that from a rook good shyt from you..your personals were hott too and the closer was jus $ik...<<lol>> i wasnt feelin your structure either but i guess its decent...good consistency..and nice flow to it all

overall:7/10

vote: publicity

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