Blackmon:
i really wasnt feelin ya verse... flow was mostly off.. and the times you had it on fell off again real quick... but not too bad, you've got skills. Punches we're kind of there. Try to get your personals a little harder hitting and you should be alright, i think you know how to bust but just not the right words to fit so it flows. I couldnt find much wordplay.

Riddle:
It was good. Nothing special, no disrespect though, for the structure you used you had it going on. Really square though, like there was 2 lines i think that used inners/multis, but the rest was last words, which is ok, just not as nice sounding. Punches were ok... lol, no personals?! nothin whoaing, but i think you have sort of the same prob as blackmon, both of you try widening your vocabs and gettin the right words to work for the right lines.. you might not know what i mean, but oh well.

but yeah... my vote goes to riddle...

peace

keep elevating

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