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Old 05-29-04, 03:19 AM   #14
Shadows edge
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Ok, besides that crap at the end about ~R~ wishing he could be black, talking about revenge on whites n all this bullshit, his verse was better. LE... don't use that battle format, it messes up the flow of your verse and the continuity of thought.

~R~ the problem with your verse was that it just sort of tailed off at the end, and sort of lacked direction throughout. you talked about stuff at the beggining, then turned it into a race thing, then just sort of ended...

I felt more with LE's verse that he was building up to something, and had a nice close.

Anyway, like I said, ~R~ got the better verse. Peace.
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