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...Belong...
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IP:
Aight peeps good battle really enjoyed readin this time for the breakdown;
VALOR: Nice verse liked the structure wordplay punches were good never really seen a rhyming structure like that before but i liked it kept it simple but to the point...nice verse elevate a lil on the structure and u'll be even more deadly wit the rhymes.
Da Magician: Weak opener ur verse picked up but it to me was too self gloryfied the opener was basically pumpin urself up...go for the disses...nice structure i think you had Val here nice punches and personals too but u kept gloryfyin yoself and it affected ya on this occasion try and focus on the opponent instead of...i am i could i would...it let you down.
V/Valor
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Originally Posted by High Dro
furthermore, june 3rd is the only good day to be born
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^ Amen Brother ^
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Originally Posted by ∆ P E X X
i'm still tryin to figure out how bein born in another country makes somebody fake.
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R.I.P OMB
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