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Old 05-29-04, 06:54 AM   #2
infinite
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i still dont understand the rhyming technique

i'll give you an example what i think rhyming ia ok

give me the mic i an't gonna rap im gonna scream at this dike
listen carefully. the words comeout are spoken trully/
they are said to try piss peeps off, tryin to bully/
so dont make up shit cause mine overlaps and rules/
aswell as your gay and when you rap half da shit is dull/

just made that up and dont know if what im doin is right, so give me ur opinion where im going wrong.
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