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Old 05-29-04, 09:03 AM   #11
boaty
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Dam, this was an easy one

Blackmon, there was like 4 times while I was readin your verse when I had to go back and re-read your lines cause it was too dam hard to follow. Work on your structure and your flow.
Pioneer, you had beter punches but they still need some work. Work on those and improve your flow. Other than that it was a good verse.

collect the five planetary forces and make haste to blaze his verses.
cause battling P is more piontless then decapitating the headless horseman.
^^^Best Line^^^

This one goes to Pioneer
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