oni:
flow was decent....punches didnt really connect and a few of them sounded very noobish...no personals.....momma jokes are herbish.....work on finding personals and thinkin of punches to go along wit them

wren:
punches hit a lot harder.....flow was decent....structure was kinda fucked cuz most of your bars had two lines rhymin and one of them had 3 lines,try to keep it the same....u kinda reversed his punches with better ones...more creative and used a lil wordplay

vote: wrenegade.....i will drop links for u 2 return favor when i get them