Skadoosh!
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IP:
this man's got 325 bucks withdrawn...
...but still gets robbed like detroit got pist-on
5...just weak man, nice second line but the 1st, wack shit!!
he tried to get me to battle someone else,i can see this punks frustration...
...so used to explainin his punches,his title even spell's out his puncuation
6...pretty played, but ok!!
laugh my ass off, this kid still counts all of his ko's...
...check my name,if i did that id have the matrix avy below
6...weak again, nice diss of his signature!!
why the fuck did i even waste three credits on him...
...his chances like the first three letters in his sig,they dim
6...u weak, but u consistent!!
i cant believe his record's twenty two and three...
...cuz guess what? i just slaughtered this wannabe emcee
6...weak again, need to elevate playa!!
This herb tryna get heard droppin' a verse that's pure wack shit..-
Don't worry kid..you'll still get 'publicity' after you get ur ass kicked..-
7...gud opener, nice play off of his name!!
I check ya battles dawg..all you cook up is cash-n-hand lines..-
But your wordplay don't paint the whole picture..sorta like 'head lines'..-
7...nice again, and the 2nd line was again a sort of play off of his name!!
When I dig deeper I find something quite disturbing..you're like 'Irving'..-
Stuck on my 'magic Johnson'..kid, u run a day-care center tryna hurt me..-
6...dawg, u fell off, that was pretty weak!!
Fuck dis fake ass wangsta wannabe..I can't 'picture u big' like IMAX..-
That's because your 'immature punches' 'come premature' to the climax..-
6...that IMAX line has been used before!!
How da hell you battlin' me with a fucked up style..celebrity overnight?..-
Nah, U was scared before the fight..dead after u flowed against SIGHT..-
6...pretty weak again, overall gud performance, u came consistent but u fell of slightly to the end!!
POINTS TOTALS
Publicity - 29/50
N-Sight - 32/50
V/ - N-Sight
Publicity u need some serious elevatin, work on ure punches and personals cuz that is wat wins battles, and try more complex wordplay!!
N-Sight, got a feelin this gone be another win for u, one point to make, drop the ..- at the end of every line cuz it gives off the impression that u still a newb. and also u came pretty weak in this battle compared to what u can do playa!!!
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