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Old 05-29-04, 12:31 PM   #28
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breakdown:

black thief:

Size up this chump,cock back tha pump,he paraplegic,he can's stand this
Still lickin his wounds from last time I had him layin on tha canvas
^^good opener nice personal 7/10
still aint elevated yet....this cats needs major construction
Thought he had a hot crew...ended up wit self destruction!
^^another good personal 7/10
viciouslessy Ill kill this bitch-to-be
He spits feces...get it?He means shit to me
^^2/10 your weakest bar
Killah Bwoy spellin his name like 100 percent jamacian
Til he posted hs pic...we all see this nigga 100 percent fakin
^^first line was good 2nd was a lil gay decent personal 5/10
son scared to post against me cause win plus I add a lesson
Killah Boi scared to grow...his punchlines fear adolescence
^^bad closer wasnt feelin it 4/10

overall: 25/50 (50%)

killah bwoy:

Only Reason U Won Last Time Was Cause Nas GhostWrote Your Shit-
Even If You Threw Ur Cd At Jay-Z Ur Record Still Couldn't Be A Hit-
^^good personal and punch decent opener 7/10
Actin' Like You Big..You Know Chryme Sindicate Didn't Want You-
Held Enygma's Fam For Randsom..he had to let him in the crew-
^^str8 bar not too hott 6/10
Dun Leave Ur Rhymes Layin Round Cause Blacks "All Up In Your Crib"-
Jackin' Lines From Your Computer table Eatin ur left-over spear ribs-
^^lol funny line but not a good punch or personal 6/10
Anerexic Nigga In Tights Runnin Around Claimin' He Black Thief-
He Really Has A 99% Average In School..Dudes Jus' A Black Geek-
^^lol funny shyt here 8/10
Everyone Dick Ridin Your Shit Got Banned Let Me See You Win Now-
Get Back To Ur Regular Job..Knittin Me Hats In Your Pink Night Gown-
^^good closer..decent wordplay 8/10

overall: 35/50 (70%)

vote: killah bwoy his punches came hard in this battle and structure was better...black thief took it in personals but killah took this battle overall

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would appreciate a honest vote from someone on my battle wit t-strom in EFL
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