U can say what chu want but neva seen the green deamon,
Laughin loud filled ur girls mouth with green's dirty seman,

^^ that does not seem like a battle verse dawg...it's like ur just flowin...its a good flow...but the punch doesn't hurt him..DISS dawg..DISS

Legendery, how can bitches call me cow when i don't eat dairy, goin out vilont make ur rear look more purple than bluebarry, life ordinary mind further than my home galaxy,
Close ur wounds bledding all on tha floor hee is a pad from maxi,



^^ Structure is too stretched...shorten lines...u had basically no punches...this was a song


i only bothered to read half ya verse cause u only got half ass skill
ill cut ya tounge in half but then ill be holding all of your skill

^^ That pretty much wins it...it's at least a PUNCH thrown and landed


Vote: Ill...actually dropped a battle verse


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