This battle was aight..but what killed it is the mistakes
Personally I rather read some wack or filler lines then to read someone throw in a line that isn't part of a bar (ex....from G-town to east coast I like to smoke herb..) or a line that doesn't make sense b/c it was forced (ex. ya flows Like kids before "puberty", you don't know "fuck"//) I read that like 10 times and it still didn't make sense...I know what you were TRYING to say but damn!
breakdown
Personals: Eclapt 5/10
Punches: Eclapt 5/10 since you only had one good punch
Quote:
"^^Things like that prove to me you're a fag craving cock
Homo gets angry over head cause somebody fucked his thought"
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Structure: Eclapt 7/10
Flows: Eclapt 5/10
both yall could def. improve..HeLL ON EARTH your flows was aight, but why don't you take longer than 2 minutes if you don't want to lose
v/Eclapt