hmmmmmmmmmm i wonder who won lol
ok lot merked u without trying k trin u need 2 work on ur flow tears and pear doesnt rhyme and the rest was 2 basic work on ur vocab i didnt c anywords in there that were big i also want u 2 work on personals and vocab and creativity
ok lot good flow vocab and personals ur structure could use a little work though and thats about it
so lot u didnt try and u still won good job u just came harder funnier more personal and more complex

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