haha... funny ish right here...


But anyways... Da. You say you're straight off the top and not premeditated... when you used some weak ass punches and some plkayed out shit... You could have had some nice punches in there but you worded them shitty. No personals at all, and thats what kills a verse... your flow was choppy too.

LI, The flow was there, you came a little weak, but had more original punches. It flowed and rolled right off of the tounge. And you had 1 alright personal and one that could have been worded and set up better. The list could have been set up better and worded differently, and the one about him sayin hes juss jokin was alright.

I give this to LI for having hte only personals... better flow, and better structure and more original punches.

You herbs need to stop voting.

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