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Old 05-29-04, 05:59 PM   #11
DirtBoy69
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breakdown for pimp rawb:

flow:nice job here really working well nice multis at the start 7/10

volcab:solid work here too really lighting it up in these catergories 7/10

punches:not too much here though weak spot in your verse best line,"I Flip Shit And Vibrate-Ya-Cystics...You Drop At What I Call Rate-Simplistic/Ya Vision See Da Future Wrong Ya Fate-Is-Opticmistic(Optic Mistake)/" 6/10

overall:20/30

breakdown for troublesome:

flow:workin not on the same level as pimp rawb though 6/10

volcab:average nothing to run home about though 6/10

punches:best part of your verse you did real well on addressing your oppenent every line fav line,"Nobody's feelin' his shit, like flushin' frostbitten fingers" good job with the punches 8/10

overall:22/30

vote--troublesome gets this, if pimp rawb had had just a couple of more punches it would of been different
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