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Old 05-29-04, 06:06 PM   #10
DirtBoy69
i changed my title !!
 
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From: Kincardine Ontario
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breakdown for bostonlyricist:

flow:alittle sloppy you did betteor here last week 6/10

volcab:average nothing too special 5/10

punches:some alright lines nothing new mainly played ideas fav line,"have you nervous like you fucked a bitch raw on her rag--" 6/10

overall=17/30

breakdown for will s. unyu:

flow:workin basic though 6/10

volcab:nothing to talk about here you need work 5/10

punches:no real lines i liked you addressed the oppenent though i don't know just not liking most of it 5/10

overall:16/30

vote--bostonlyricist
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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league