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Old 05-30-04, 12:59 AM   #1
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Don: was feeling ur lines more

Flow and Structure:
ur ryhmes flowed good ur structure add 2 it 7/10

Personals and Punchlines:
u had some here and there most of em hit pretty hard... this was your best section of the battle.... 7.5 or 7/10

overall: 7/10

Lyrically: wasn't reallly feeling your lines gotta practice more...

Flow and Structure:
ur flow was ok 5/10 mabye 6/10 ur structure wasn't dat great so it didn't add 2 it...

Personals and Punchlines:
u had none... so some advice add some 2 ur next verse u spit in a battle... 0/10

overall: 5/10

Winner: Don
by far no competition... his punchlines and personals took the battle cuz lhyrical didn't have any.... and his rhymes flowed more....
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