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Old 05-30-04, 01:25 AM   #11
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Originally Posted by DirtBoy69
breakdown for bostonlyricist:

flow:alittle sloppy you did betteor here last week 6/10

volcab:average nothing too special 5/10

punches:some alright lines nothing new mainly played ideas fav line,"have you nervous like you fucked a bitch raw on her rag--" 6/10

overall=17/30

breakdown for will s. unyu:

flow:workin basic though 6/10

volcab:nothing to talk about here you need work 5/10

punches:no real lines i liked you addressed the oppenent though i don't know just not liking most of it 5/10

overall:16/30

vote--bostonlyricist

looooooooooooooooooooooooooool
you DID notice that you was the only one that voted against me
right?
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Originally Posted by strobe
If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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