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Old 05-30-04, 01:28 AM   #10
DeaDly RhymeZ 01
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HOW MANY VOTES got D/q'd shit


Don got this wun over all cause he rhymed more but u lacked Vocab n Wordplay good vErse tho

Lyricalyabusiv ur lines where 2 short and didint rhyme i think u nneeed tto elavate

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Lyricalyabusiv

Flow 4/10
Rhymes3/10
Punches 4/10
Sturcture 3/10
Vocab 2/10
Wordplay 3/10
19/60

DON

FLow 5/10
Rhymes 6/10
Punches 7/10
Structure 3/10
Vocab 4/10
Wordplay 4/10
29/60


V/DON
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