View Single Post
Old 05-30-04, 01:39 AM   #11
Triple_N
Ya mom massages my nuts
 
Triple_N's Avatar
 
Posts: 1,991
From: Queens, NY
IP:

Good battle....Breakdown for valor, your verse was ok, you had a few good punches, an ya had some decent personals, you had decent vocab, couda been stronger
Punches 7/10
Personals 6/10
Flow 5/10
Structure 4/10
Creativity 5/10
Overall: 27/50

Da magician.....man me an you cool an everything but you messed up, your verse was tight but it was to self glorying, you had a few punches, but a lot of your verse wasn't aimed at him an thats a no no in battles
Punches 5/10
Personals 2/10
Flow 6/10
Structure 6/10
Creativity 4/10
Overall 23/50
Vote Valor
__________________
Haters spend all they time hating on another's life
Then wonder why when presenting there's to others...no one looks twice
Because at the end of the day, you get what you give
So, when you consumed with his...don't get mad when everyone else is
Send a message via AIM to Triple_N