the breakdown...

unholy first

This kid is Struggle's Day after Day for his RB record to Suceed..
But after u Read this it'll Have Blood Trickle as His Eye's Bleed..
5 are you serious...that's not an opener...
Do i Make ur Stomach Turn More then Gettin ur Ball's Tagged..
u Spit Slow b/c u Lagged?Or did Gay Porno get ur CP Red Flagged.
6.5 decent...stupid and played though...where's some wordplay
You Couldnt Be Hot if u Got baked in a Oven on it's Hightest Degree..
Cant you See?My Flow leaves u Dead,Floatin out to Sea..
4 your kidding with this line right?
Ur a Itch that Need's to Be Scratched like Ur Pubic Lice..
Take Some Advice when a Girl Offers u Crab Cake dont take a Slice..
3 wow...i'll never get these 3 minutes back
Countless Wins?Why does he Lie to Try and Make Friends..
Wait!?! Im 100% Sure that Lieng is one of God's Deadly Sin's..
4 hmmm...kind of a personal...although terrible...wit...look it up in the dictionary
You should be "iLL" Commin form Big Bad NewYork City..
Disgracin the Streets with ur Half Baked Battle's its a Pity..
3 hmm...BRUTAL KID
How are u N[Cubed] When ur Shit doesnt fit the A-B-C's..
Only reason u got 23 Win's is b/c uve battles Wanna-Be Emcee's..
5 basic...but not terrible...so it's your best line
It's Ok Dont be sad or Cry ur Audio Record is 0-0 So ur Still Evan..
Bitch?Yes ur Mine But dont Cross the Line or ur Brain ull be Retreavin..
1 wow...that's a bad line...that's all i can say...oh oh...also you suck at life...haha jokes


i'm going to kill myself if triplen's verse is that bad...


Ok look kid, Rule #1 when making personals is stick to the facts
To make it worse, ya punches were more played than "kanye west" tracks
7 hahah...see unholy that's a line...
I mean look at ya verse, you spit fillers by the bunch
Man, even if u owned "tropicana" u couldn't manufacture a "punch"
7 another decent to good line...i'm starting to wake up again
For you to get at least one vote in this thread is gon be a real strife
Your lyrics are "juvenile" they need good rhymes "in they life"
5 decent...
Your verse is wack as fuck, but for your effort I applaud
Its sad tho, cuz wit verses like that u gon get "sonned" more than "baby wards"4boo..not a big fan
Did u even see ya verse, it has exactly 0 lyrical worth
Its not ya fault, I seen ya pic, you've been "fucked since birth"
7 BAMM...good shit...woulda been better with a link
I was surprised to see u asian, you tryin' to be next jin?
U seemed caucasian, cuz lookin at ya verse u'd think "Vaniila ice" is ya "next of kin"4 boo...ice lines are wack
I can't even call ya rhymes newb, cuz they younger than u in ya pic
I mean how u gon challenge a vet, when ya rhymes still on "wic"6 haha...decent...easy battle to decide


vote triple N

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