yo that was hot..i liked it a lot honestly...but there is flaws in everybodies work...and the flaw i saw on yours was..you used too many multis..that sounds strange...but it makes your lines too long..somebody touched on that already...but yea..it's because of the multis...using them is fine..but the more you use them...the more of less fitting words you have to try and use..and it takes away from your overall product...good drop tho...i enjoyed readin it..stay up homie

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