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Old 05-30-04, 08:58 AM   #15
HELLonEARTH
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S. CArter ya had good structure, mediocre flow tho. Get some personnals, and ya had ok punches. They landed tho.

Lyrical-ya had no rhyme scheme, or if you did i couldn't find it. No punches with wack flow and structure. THis was a landslide.

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