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Old 05-30-04, 09:05 AM   #14
HELLonEARTH
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Aiight Skillz ya had ok structure but ya flow was fucked. You had 4 word lines then like 15 word lines it was complicated like reading a kidnergardeners writing. Ya punches were ok i.e. the Et one caught my attention

Fresh ya had good structure and ya flow was very good. I liked how you werked in the history lesson. Ya punches just connected better. I wa feelin ya verse much better.

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