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Old 05-30-04, 12:54 PM   #10
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Cream is Cinderella tryna slip in our crew..like it was a glass slipper..-
But it's 'clear' our 'shoes' are too big to fit him..becuz kid is NOT a winner..-
Let the 'record' show his potential..kid gets 'Creamed' in every event..-
Only time he looks down on his opponent is when he peeps the arial pic..-
Niggas "F" him like dat stereo shit..so fuck him I don't even respect him..-
Electromagnetic waves hit my sight..ur not even in N-Sights Spectrum..-
Plug ur rectum..you've dropped enough 'shit' for the Sanitation Commission..-
Ur 'infant style' is 'infantile'..ur are NOT grown enough for this mission..-
Listen, ur just a Georgia Peach I was born to beat..kid, u bore me to sleep..-
How u 'hustle for pesos' and can't afford to eat..u 'herb just adorn the beef'..-

You had an okay verse man....
you gettin better.....your structure was really good in this and i liked your flow it blended really good and wasnt hard to read at all......Your punches was good and they hit hard and stuck.....keep it up man.........


Creams's best lines

NONE

you need to elevate man.......you had no structure what so ever......your flow was horried and i couldnt read your verse at all becuase your lines was short then really long.....you need to work on that alot.....and your punches they didnt even really hit you seriously need to elevate alot man.....pc

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hit this up wit honest vote
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126824
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