Metaphorically im twistin yo knees and got you crawlin on glass.
Because I shattered yo jaw and threw yo face in the grass.

^^ Filler and it makes no sense..NEVER OPEN a battle with FILLER...shud be ur best punch in the battle...


This shit aint even a fuckin battle, you’re the whole laughin stock.
Your in yo room pullin cocks out yo mouth when you hear yo mom knock.
And Yo ass is to lame dawg you should of never even started.
And yo mom never gave birth to you bitch, she pussy farted!

^^^ Disses/punches are corny and immature...develop some creative ways to diss him using personals/metas/wordplay

elevate dawg...ur flow was coo tho

15/30

You've had four battles and each one you need a brain fix...
But instead you got your shit stird and then got it Mixx ...

^^ Not a strong opener...but better than jacket's


This dude thinks he is back in his bedroom slapping his dick off of his face...
All these newbs be thinking that the compare to all of us vets...
But all of your verse look like you just be spazzing out with tourettes...


^^ Decent...but like Jacket's, lacking in complexity...I'd like to see you develop more intricate set ups for ur punches using more wordplay

decent verse tho

20/30


Vote: Blak

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