i changed my title !!
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breakdown for illtalic:
flow:nice job some multis thrown in too workin well 7/10
volcab:good job here too i liked the use 7/10
punches:this is where i thought you weren't workin too well nothing too great you threw punches though so 6/10
overall:20/30
breakdown for premination:
flow:basic not quite as good as illtalic 6/10
volcab:workin well no problems 7/10
punches:you had a couple of alright lines my fav,"You Like ‘tony blair’…the way ‘condoms’ bein launched at~ya…" good job at keepin the lines personal 8/10
overall:21/30
vote--premination it really came down to the punches here good job
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's
and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league
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