batter this peasent “smash” ya “insides" like "splattered-intestines"//
put "clocks on ya face" so i could "punch you in a matter-of-seconds"//

^^ Creative set up with the punch...actual punch was good...but not devastating

im beatin this nigga so bad that he's trying to retire //
my rhymes reflect heat you need a stove to produce fire//
and if i catch-ya-bluffin i just gotta press-a-button//
ill leave u less-than-nothin like a fuckin breast-reduction//


^^ Wudda been funnier had u said BOOB reduction...but, that wouldn't fit in with the rhyme...good verse...wordplay was there...overall solid

His Rhymes Are DuMb....How Can You Call His Flow InTeLLiGenT...?
Hes =Tormented=.....My PunchLines To Him Is A =Present= Call Him A Bendy Straw Cuz He Gets =Bent=

^^ wassup wit the ==== hard to follow ur flow...and ur punches did not hit that hard

Vote: FLow...way more creativity/harder hitting pnches