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Old 05-30-04, 07:22 PM   #7
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in all of your Sen-ten-ces you always talk bout the benz-ya-in-
Really you poor kid..ya car is fake and you never seen a ben-ja-min-

Nice rhyming and personal...good opener


flow is weak bout to merk-this-geek ya ass-cheeks and ya lack heat-
bars old like ancient antiques leave burn marks on da side of ya cheek-

^^ Good flow..decent punch

spittin wack flows I rip and attack hoes rip out your back-bone-
bitch gettin ta-ckled drop my lines leave you with a cracked-toe-

^^ Nice rhyming..bordering on filler...a personal in there would have made it DOPE

get demolished n' ripped, get blown away by the gage-n' fifth-
kisin my shit? burn ya lips aint gettin picked up like a broken fork lift-

^^ AGain...nice flow..rhyming...punches are there...but border on filler

e-tin clowned put da mic down kids tryna bite my shit like mike-now-
u wanna fight noq like comin to the stage, you gettin the light now-

^^^ Dats nice...good closer

a virus on yo computer yo flow still want be sick....
u gettin swept in dis like the new york knicks.....

^^ Not feelin this...I'm also not feeling the way you centered your verse...kinda tacky

lyricks is crosseyed-off da page i see y u call it hipnotick.....
instead of killa it should be special K cuz yo flow is retarted...

^^ Ooooooh..dats hot...lol..best line of the battle so far

bow down bitch cuz u thru-scaratch yo head and wonder y newbs in yo crew...
take yo head offf yo shoulders,spit it back at u cuz u bassically juss got blew..

^^^ Nah...punch didn't have desired effect...u should have ended the 2nd line with the personal about news in the crew...dat woulda killed it...!!!

yo punches is neva connecting not even scratching my verse...
i reinverse,between u and andre3000 i dont kno whos the worste....


^^^ Not feeling this..blah..and what's wrong with Andre3000 besides the fact that he dresses like a drag queen?


disconnected,punches neva connected yo verse leavin me histicrcally.....
u juss been revocked damnn killah i killed u wit hipknotic strategies.....


^^ Rhyming is off..and does histicrcally mean hysterically?...um...eh closer


Polific...Killa dropped 1st...which, as we all know, meant that you could have studied his verse and came harder. You should have done that. Your verse had potential, including the best line in the battle with "special K"..However, 1 line doesn't make a battle. So, My vote has to go to Killa for being way more consistent throughout his verse than you were. YOu had this battle in the bad then blew it Pol.


srry...Vote: Killa...nice verses from both