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Old 05-30-04, 08:07 PM   #11
HELLonEARTH
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Aiight it lays out like this
Gotta you had some sidewinder punches (yeast one) they hit but could've glanced off. Werk on dat. No personnals that were worth menchinin ya flow was off but ya structure was ok. Punches overall were mediocre

Lady ya hd more Personnals (dat shit wins battles). Ya had flow but it got choppy at parts, and Structure was good. A little bit of a rhymeing problem (that shit loses battles). Overall punches were good.

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