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Old 05-30-04, 09:06 PM   #20
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A Reflection Of The Past
 
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oookayyy

HELLONEARTH ~ur flow was good,ur punches hit decent,u had a few personels,but ur structure was crap,so u must elevate on structure,everything else seemed good.....okay

ECLAPT~u flowed a little off ,ur punches were ok.ur structure was wack also,and i didnt see any personels....so work on finding personels,and get a better structure okay,and try to work on ur flow also


v/hellonearth
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