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Old 05-30-04, 11:37 PM   #12
Sik Wit It
 
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Flow - xxxxx, was structured better, which made it flow better

Punches - sleep, some were played by both cats, but i felt that xxxxx had more and the ones he did have hit alot harder

Personals - sleep, had alot more, and were alot better, ice's were pretty lame and didn't form together to well.. suggestion sleep you shouldn't have to explain your personals

Multies - Obviously sleep, by his type of rhyme scheme, his rhyme scheme almost always guarantees him flow and multies. If your a newb take a close look and you'll see.

Vocab - Both were lacking on this, and need to elevate

Originality - Even, some of lines by both of you were played, but overall alright verses