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		Flow - xxxxx, was structured better, which made it flow better 
 
Punches - sleep, some were played by both cats, but i felt that xxxxx had more and the ones he did have hit alot harder 
 
Personals - sleep, had alot more, and were alot better, ice's were pretty lame and didn't form together to well.. suggestion sleep you shouldn't have to explain your personals 
 
Multies - Obviously sleep, by his type of rhyme scheme, his rhyme scheme almost always guarantees him flow and multies. If your a newb take a close look and you'll see. 
 
Vocab - Both were lacking on this, and need to elevate 
 
Originality - Even, some of lines by both of you were played, but overall alright verses 
		
	
		
		
		
		
		
	
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