iight im really tired so if my vot is lame then let me knwo i will edit it and leave more feedback

don-your verse was okay i would like to see you work on your structure a lil bit because your lines was stretched and shit......makes your flow choppy......your punches was okay and shit but you could still use some elevation......otther then that the shit was good.......keep it up man

kkkhater-i seriously hope that you come harder then this in our battle in the league......cause if you dont your gunna get merked.....you had good structure but thats about it your punches was played and the concepts was wack.....elevate

v/don

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