X nice opener but your verse kind of fell off towards the middle an ending.

ex:I like ya stlyle, but I can see ya ass crack more then screen tenson...//
My rhymes make ya yellow and fat..So we call can call ya homer simpson..//

I hope you don't see to much of his ass crack dun. anyway killah nice verse, nice punches and structure.

killah's best punches:Kids Name Fits His Skills 'Cause He's Lyrically Xcellin Backwards-
Like A Weed Plant In A Veggy Garden Im Gettin Rid Of Dis Bad-"Herb"-

Like A Horrible Pitcher Lines Are Comin Straight For Your Face-
Kid Gone Holy Have him In front row of a church session..Next To Mace-


X your pumches weren't hittinas hard as these ^^^^^^
X step your punches up, nice flow u just need to work onconsistency.
Killah nice verse, punches and milti's, work on better lyrics.

vote=Killah

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